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Book Review: Synchronicity by Michaelbrent Collings

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Synchronicity by Michaelbrent Collings

Written Insomnia Press, 2021

ISBN: 38744369R00197

Availability: paperback, Kindle edition Amazon.com )

 

Synchronicity, the newest thriller from Michaelbrent Collings, succeeds in most areas, while missing in a few.  His trademark skill of writing action sequences and maintaining a fast pace is on full display, but the story does skimp a little on fleshing out the plot for the reader.  It’s a decent read, just not quite to the level of excellence of his most recent novels.

 

“Book” Malcolm is a small-time pickpocket and thief who drifts through life, taking what he can.  One day, unknown people try to kill him on a subway platform.  With their light-speed method of fighting, abnormal healing powers, and the ability to shift consciousness from one body to another, they resemble the characters in The Matrix.  Then, Book is on the run, pursued by some and aided by others, as he struggles to answer the question: “why me?”  Later, Book becomes aware of his own powers, and tries to stop the villains from using the consciousness-shifting device to achieve world domination.

 

Collings has always been good at making a story move quickly and providing plenty of action along the way, and Synchronicity continues the trend.  As always, it starts off fast; the destruction on the subway platform happens in the first few pages, and the pace never lets up until the end of the story.  The numerous action sequences (and there are a LOT) are well detailed and thought out, and show the author’s usual flair for bone-crushing intensity, as well as violent gunfights.  In terms of a straight thrill ride of a story, Synchronicity hits the target dead-on.

 

However, it takes more than just breakneck speed to engross some readers start to finish, and that’s where Synchronicity falls a bit short.  It’s almost too fast, and doesn’t allow the plot enough time to breathe, in terms of explanation.  It’s written so the reader never knows more than Book himself throughout the story, and that’s good for character development, but frustrating for the reader.  There is little backstory or dialogue between other characters to give readers some explanation prior to the big reveal at the end.  This makes it harder to get interested in the characters, since you don’t know much about why they are acting like they are.  It’s a shame, because the reason behind the consciousness-jumping technology is quite clever, but it doesn’t get much page time.  More breaks from the hyper-speed of the narrative to detail the plot would have gone a long way.  It’s a good action book, just a little more one-dimensional than Collings’s usual writing.

 

Synchronicity will probably keep his legions of fans entertained, but first-timers might want to start with Scavenger Hunt or the Stranger series instead, to get a better perspective on his writing.

 

Reviewed by Murray Samuelson

Book Review: Shockadelica by Jon O’ Bergh

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Shockadelica by Jon O’Bergh

Bookbaby, 2021

ISBN: 9781098372415

Available: Paperback, Kindle edition Bookshop.orgAmazon.com )

 

Shockadelica is a suspense/horror ghost story that uses the tried and true tools of an old apartment building with mysterious noises in the night.  The premise has worked for many authors over the years, but Shockadelica never quite gets the story off the ground floor.  It’s an extremely dialogue-heavy story, and it’s difficult to keep the reader’s interest through the entire 252 pages.

 

Drag queen Kendall and his buddy Jenna start hearing unexplainable noises in their apartment building, and they soon learn that their neighbors do as well.  Feeling that an actual haunting would be great material for their “all things horror” weekly podcast, Kendall and Jenna investigate, and learn that the building has a sinister history.  The rest is a mystery as they try to find the source of the noises in the building, and whether it is a true haunt, or human nature with an evil purpose.

 

It’s a decent premise, just very slow moving.  The first 130 pages consist almost entirely of Kendall and Jenna interviewing the building’s other inhabitants to learn what they may have seen or heard.  The dialogue is  straightforward, without much injection of the characters’ personalities.  Hearing about the “hauntings” secondhand through dialogue with the other residents hurts the story’s excitement level. Describing the incidents as they actually happen from a narrative point of view would have helped; the few times the hauntings are narrated by the author are pretty good, and doing it more would have helped a great deal.   The story doesn’t start building real interest until around page 186.  The payoff at the end of the book is decent and there is a nice touch of Irish folk legend involved, it’s just questionable if readers will make it that far.

 

As for the characters, the secondary ones help the story more than the primary ones.  Kendall and Jenna are uninspiring characters; outside of talking about dresses, they don’t do much and generate minimal interest or sympathy.  Fleshing them out more would have helped.  The secondary characters are eclectic and have a little more life.  Vince, the goth/metal musician, is fun, and Rooney is probably the best.  She makes her living doing bogus written and video reviews for products she’s never used, and her adventures between the building walls trying to scare her annoying neighbor add some much-needed flair.  It’s too bad the main characters weren’t as entertaining.

 

Shockadelica may appeal to some readers who like stories with a lot of exposition, but most readers will probably want to skip this one.

 

 

Reviewed by Murray Samuelson

Book Review: The Between by Ryan Leslie

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The Between by Ryan Leslie

Parliament House, 2021

ISBN: 9798741008720

Availability: Paperback, Kindle edition, audiobook Bookshop.org |  Amazon.com )

 

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…and what you’ll find in this book is a wildly original story that’s also a homage to the 80’s computer games, when text-based ASCII games like ZORK were all the rage.  Combining adventure, horror, mystery, and a touch of nerdiness, The Between is one of the year’s best so far.

 

Mild-mannered health care executive Paul Prentice discovers a large iron door set in the ground while digging in his Texas backyard.  He and his carefree, wisecrack-a-minute buddy Jay wrestle open the door and descend the ladder underneath.  They find themselves in a maze of identical rooms, which eventually leads to other worlds of existence containing things like hellhounds of ash, killer robots made of scrap metal, and a vengeful god, Kosmaro, who imprisons souls.  Jay and Paul later learn that the world they entered is based on The Between, an old text-based computer game.  They try to escape, but eventually have to decide…do they want to escape?

 

The Between is a fast paced read, with a high level of depth and creativity.  With multiple different world levels and all of them having different entrances and exits, there’s no shortage of adventure for Jay and Paul.  The book does a good job tying back into the whole “computer game” theme; if you used to play those games, you may see where some of the inspiration for the worlds and characters in the book came from.   What made text-based games fun was that they allowed you to become another individual entirely, and The Between does a good job inserting that theme into the writing.  Many who enter The Between take on actual roles that exist in the computer game, and they keep the role until they escape, or are killed.  This allows for intriguing personality shifts within the characters, such as the “failure in life,” Jay, transforming into a murderous assassin, the stelisto.  The story occasionally flips back to Texas, providing a nice contrast to the insanity of The Between.  It’s a multi-layered story, and a true original.

 

A good setting is nothing without good characters, and in addition to Paul and Jay, the other players in The Between do a good job driving the story and keeping it focused.  The two female leads, star athlete Supriya, and the cold-hearted former ballet queen Corienne, provide good counterparts for Paul and Jay, and there’s enough backstory to fill out the characters and allow the reader to feel a connection to them.  Jay is particularly memorable; his “no worries” attitude helps give the story a dash of humor at times that helps lighten the mood.  It’s a wild ride from beginning to end, and one that readers won’t want to miss.  Highly recommended.

 

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Reviewed by Murray Samuelson