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Book Review: Harvest Moon (The Chosen of Bella Luna, #1) by Lyra Zonder

Harvest Moon (The Chosen of Bella Luna, #1), by Lyra Zonder

Newman Springs Publishing, 2019

ISBN: 978-1-64096-784-7

Availability: paperback, Kindle

 

If you like exciting stories, this isn’t for you.

If you like werewolf stories, this isn’t for you either.

If you like horror stories, this REALLY isn’t for you.

BUT…if you loved the Twilight series and can handle pages of graphic sex, this is right up your alley.

Harvest Moon tells the predictable story of Bella and Edward (sorry, Abigail and Killian) with Abby being a half-breed werewolf and Killian being a full-blooded one.  Abby is married to an abusive human husband in Seattle, and Killian is the alpha male of a pack of werewolves in Idaho.  Killian’s sister receives a vision that Abby is meant to be Killian’s lifelong “mate,”so he races off to Seattle to find her, then brings her home. From there, it goes like this, and it’s a minor spoiler: Kidnapping.  Car chase.  Brief fight.  Sex.  Celebration.  A few family revelations.  The End.  That sums up almost 400 pages.

Problems abound in this one.  The main one is that the characters, with one notable exception, are flatter than a flower in a hydraulic press.  Killian is the predictable Adonis, a muscle-bound, wolfosterone-loaded hothead. He’s willing to die, or kill, anyone who interferes with his “soulmate”; while Abby is a timid wallflower.  As expected, they rub off on each other: Abby develops a bit of backbone, and Killian learns to occasionally use more than two brain cells to reason out a situation.  The rest of the characters simply aren’t interesting, with the exception of Nicky ‘The Mouth.” He’s the one character loaded with personality who is actually entertaining. The rest are easily forgettable.  It’s a shame the other characters weren’t developed as well as him: it might have saved the story.

Other problems include the focus of the story and the lack of “wolf time”.  Half the book was just Killian and Abby, professing their love and constantly talking about how they can’t live without each other, they were meant for each other, they would die for each other, etc.  The point was made quickly enough; the author didn’t need to take up the majority of the book with it.  Also, if it’s a story about werewolves, shouldn’t it have, um…WEREWOLVES?  The characters were only in wolf form for about five pages of the entire book– not a recipe for a compelling story.  In addition, parts of the book strain credibility.  For example, the characters are able to disable the security camera system on a hospital, which would typically have its master panel inside, from the OUTSIDE!  Fiction doesn’t have to be perfect, but it helps to have at least a little bit of realism.  Did I mention that these wolves can run over 80MPH?  Wolves aren’t sprinters: were these wolves cross-bred with cheetahs?

In short, this is an imitation of Twilight with enough titillating sex to satisfy readers who like that sort of thing.  Anyone else would do well to avoid this one.

 

Recommended: for readers of paranormal romance.

Not recommended: everyone else.

 

Contains: mild violence, mild profanity, graphic sex.

 

Reviewed by Murray Samuelson

Book Review: Rose by Rami Ungar

Rose by Rami Ungar

Castrum Press, 2019

ISBN-13: 978-1912327430

Available: Paperback, Kindle Edition

 

Rose wakes alone from a deep sleep, disoriented, unable to remember most of the past two years, and, in a horrific discovery, discovers she is part plant. She is soon joined by Paris, who tells her he is her fiance, and saved her from a stalker who had fatally harmed her by taking her to his greenhouse and casting a Japanese spell on her that saved her life but appears to have gone somewhat awry. Since it’s winter, and freezing outside, as a plant she is trapped in his greenhouse and connecting apartment with no choice but to trust that he is telling her the truth, although observations of his behavior show that he can be disturbingly erratic and possessive.  Despite her memory loss, Rose’s character hasn’t changed, and she finds it difficult to believe that she would have willingly agreed to marry Paris. A search of his apartment one day when he is out leads to the discovery of a secret diary (in Dutch, a language Rose happens to know) as well as his Japanese spellbook. The diary details Paris’s relationship with Rose, but something about it doesn’t seem right. When Paris’ father breaks into the apartment and discovers Rose, he is shocked, because it has been in the news that Rose was kidnapped and her fiance was killed by a stranger who violently attacked them. The two of are caught and dragged away on a cross-country journey where neither of them knows what might happen next, except that it won’t be good.

Paris reveals that his actions toward the women who reject him and their lovers stem from a traumatic incident that occurred when his father sent him to a camp that promised to “make him into a man”.  He has learned to command spells from the Japanese spellbook that give him the ability to take what he wants, control other people, and torture and kill people, and intends to use these on Rose and his father.  However, a cruel, mischief-making Japanese demon controls the spellbook, and after enough mayhem ensues, gives Rose an opportunity to end Paris’ cruelty and madness and save herself… at a price.

The first half of this book is creepy because the reader is getting only Rose’s perspective, and with her trauma and amnesia she is not a reliable narrator. In addition, only the least observant of readers will miss the way Paris gaslights and terrorizes Rose, while at the same time expressing his adoration for her. The setup screams “abusive, violent scenario” and watching Rose come around to this understanding is kind of like watching a trainwreck in slow motion. There’s also some pretty strong and heavy-handed foreshadowing about societal expectations of boys and men and the unintended consequences of toxic masculinity and bullying, which Paris claims is the origin of his behavior.  The second part is where Ungar’s fantastical imagination of ways to torment people comes into its own (although I’m curious about his idea to use of acupuncture needles to cause pain, since they’re supposed to awaken self-healing and cause soreness at the most). He does not shy away from describing the impact of Paris’ spells and insanity. I don’t think I will ever get the vivid descriptions of tormented trees out of my head. One thing I found particularly disturbing was that Paris used a spell on the young teenage sisters of the women he tortured to make them fall in love with him, assist in torturing their siblings, and become his willing sexual slaves (this isn’t graphically depicted, but what you do see is bad enough).

Rose is supposed to be a tale of the supernatural, but with the exception of the protagonist, the supernatural aspect takes a backseat to the human antagonist and his agenda for almost all of the book. And for most of the book, the supernatural terrors are more of an enhancement of the methods and agenda of the villain, rather than the main force driving the story. The ending is pretty close to being a deus ex machina, and left me feeling unsatisfied. However, I did like the character of Rose and her resilience in spite of baffling and frightening circumstances, and I feel like the book successfully spotlighted the damage gaslighting and toxic masculinity can have on individuals trapped by circumstance and those they touch. Ungar successfully evinced feelings of dread in this reader, and while readers of extreme horror probably won’t be fazed, it was more than gruesome and stomach-turning enough for me.

It isn’t often that a novel with a sentient plant as narrator comes along, so Rose is worth checking out just to see what Ungar did with the concept. And although I found the ending somewhat unsatisfying, the journey there with Rose was worth taking.

 

Book Review: Midnight Reynolds and the Spectral Transformer (Book 1) by Catherine Holt.

Midnight Reynolds and the Spectral Transformer: Book One by Catherine Holt
Albert Whitman & Company, 2017
ISBN-13: 978-0807551257
Available: Hardcover, paperback, Kindle edition

 

Midnight Reynolds was born at the stroke of midnight on Halloween. Her name and birthday have always made her stand out, when all she wants is to fit in. When her slightly wacky family– vegetarian recipe blogger mom, her fiance Phil (a mechanic who enjoys dressing like a Viking) and older sister Taylor– move to a new town, two popular girls, Sav and Lucy, immediately draw her in, and Midnight finds herself “fitting in” for the first time. The only problem is that Sav and Lucy both come from well-to-do backgrounds, while Midnight’s family is a little more financially stretched. So when Sav invites her to a week at a ski chalet over their winter vacation, Midnight has to find a job to earn the $200 she’ll need to buy things for the trip.  She takes a job with Miss Appleby, a neighbor with a broken leg. Miss Appleby was also born at the stroke of midnight on Halloween, and she tells Midnight that their birthday uniquely qualifies them to see ghosts, or “spectral energy”, and capture it. Miss Appleby has been doing this on her own, but now that she’s broken her leg, until she heals, she needs Midnight to do the ghost hunting. She explains to Midnight that spectral energyis dangerous. It possesses objects, and in order to remove it, Midnight will have to use a camera-like item called a spectral transformer to capture it. Once the spectral energy has been trapped on a glass plate, it can be separated later and held in a lead-lined tank in Miss Appleby’s yard.

While she’s working hard at fitting in and earning money (tw0 things that don’t necessarily match up) Midnight has additionally been partnered with the school goth, Tabitha, for a local history project. Midnight’s incredible organizational and spreadsheet skills (a weirdness she doesn’t share with her friends) and Tabitha’s interest in cemeteries and dead people are both valuable for the project, and it turns out that the two girls actually get along pretty well. Midnight can’t understand why Tabitha prefers her all-black look over friendship with Sav and Lucy, but most readers will pick that up right away, because you can’t not like Tabitha, and Sav and Lucy are pretty self-absorbed. Tabitha is into research and libraries (according to Tabitha, the librarian “may be a hacker, or a ninja”) and is also adventurous, so she turns out to be a perfect accomplice for Midnight as it turns out that Miss Appleby may not be telling the truth.

Midnight is an exasperating character, but we do get to see character growth.  I enjoyed seeing her change as she encountered unlikely aspects of characters who could have been left undeveloped.  Tabitha could have been a stereotypical goth girl, but Holt gives her context and a unique personality. Midnight’s soon-to-be-stepfather, who she is impatient with through the whole book, turns out to have hidden depths. Even cute boy Logan has more substance than I typically expect in a book this short. There are plenty of characters who still need fleshing out, but since this is the first book in a series, I expect we’ll see more of that in later volumes.

This isn’t a terribly scary book, but it does have its moments. Miss Appleby is responsible for some deeply disturbing actions, and Holt has strong descriptive powers. Midnight Reynolds and the Spectral Transformer  is an entertaining read for a tween looking for ghostbusting adventure and mild scares, and now that she’s come into her own, I’ll be interested to see what happens in book two. Recommended.