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Book Review: The Condemned by Jesse Rosenbaum

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The Condemned by Jesse Rosenbaum

Fulton Books, 2021

ISBN: 9781649523228

Available: Paperback, Kindle edition  Bookshop.org  |  Amazon.com  )

 

The Condemned is an entertaining, although occasionally predictable debut novel from Jesse Rosenbaum.  It’s a decent story and worth reading, although it could have used one more edit to correct the grammatical mistakes that pop up from time to time.

 

The story itself is fun, and puts a few new ideas into the “ordinary guy dealing with angels and demons” plotline.  Michael is your everyday college student who has the misfortune to be visited by Orrix, one of Lucifer’s former high level demon flunkies.  Orrix was banished to Purgatory for insubordination, and he wants to return to Hell to give Lucifer a beating and take over his job.  Orrix gives Michael a choice: help him find an ancient book that will allow him to return to Hell, or Orrix will make Michael’s life miserable.  Not really having a choice, Michael and his friend Tom search for the book so they can get Orrix out of their lives and return to normal.

 

The plotline is solid, and it’s a nice change from the usual good vs. evil.  Instead, it’s “good mixed up with evil” vs. evil, as Lucifer does play a role in the book, and neither he nor Orrix are shining paragons of virtue.   It’s quite fun, with both Lucifer and Orrix making their case for why each should win, since both of them are pathological liars.  The author shows good creativity with the descriptions of the afterlife, and there’s some good imagery.  The upside-down trees growing from the bottom of precipices (complete with bodies hanged from them) are a good example.  The dialogue between the characters fits in nicely and fills in the plot, keeping the story moving at a brisk pace.  For generating reader interest, Orrix and Lucifer steal the show.  Poor Michael seems a bit hapless and somewhat puppet-like, since he really isn’t given much choice in… anything, really.  He’s a likable character, but he should have been given a little more free will: his lack of control over his destiny makes him somewhat one-dimensional.

 

All the good points make for a perfectly good story, but the way the dialogue is written could have used a bit more spit and polish.  It is written in more of a script form, as opposed to a story form.   It’s just dialogue, with no indication of who the speaker is.  It never gets confusing as to who said what, but the style detracts from the emotion of what the characters say.  Of course, it could be a stylistic choice by the author, although it’s one not seen very often in fiction.

 

Overall, it’s a likable first effort from a new author.

 

Reviewed by Murray Samuelson

Book Review: Ghost Girl by Ally Malineko

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Ghost Girl  by Ally Malineko

Katherine Tegen Books, 2021

ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-0063044609

Available: Hardcover, Kindle edition, audiobook Bookshop.org |  Amazon.com )

 

Knobb’s Ferry is a sleepy little town, just south of Sleepy Hollow, home to the tale “Ichabod Crane and the Headless Horseman”, is the kind of place tourist stop to fill up with a tank of gas or have a slice of pie on the way, and it’s also home to sixth grader Zee Puckett, who has just discovered she is gifted with the ability to see ghosts.

Zee is an outsider with a prickly personality, but she is also a born storyteller, and she especially loves making up and telling ghost stories, much to the delight of her peers. She lives with her older sister, Abby. Their father has been out of town for six months, looking for work, and they haven’t heard from him, so the girls are scraping by. While Abby works, Zee goes to school and hangs out at the cemetery with her friend Elijah. Elijah’s mother is ill, and his father was an athlete and is now a mechanic. Elijah is bright, but uninterested in sports or cars, a disappointment to his dad. During a field trip to the library, Zee sees her first ghost. She’s spotted by her frenemy, popular Nellie Blake, who announces on the bus home that Zee thinks she was talking to a ghost, earning Zee the nickname “Ghost Girl”.

In the meantime, the principal has disappeared, leading to the appointment of a new one, Principal Scratch. Principal Scratch encourages the students to put themselves first, and focus on their own desires, and Zee watches as the people around her start to see their hopes miraculously come true. After a visit from Principal Scratch, the girls’ father starts regularly calling Abby, Eli’s mother is suddenly healthy again, and Nellie finds her missing dog.  Everyone in town loves Principal Scratch, yet the townspeople are drained of energy. Only Zee can see that something is wrong, and she helps Eli and Nellie break Principal Scratch’s hold over them. Can the three of them stop Principal Scratch and break his hold over the town?

Early in the book Principal Scratch muses that sixth grade is a testing time, “a strange, in-between time… when we walk that delicate line between good and bad. Between bully and friend.”  Malineko portrays the growth of Zee and her friends in that liminal time, as they realize people, including each other, have more going on than they show to the world, and that that line is not as solid as it appears.

With vivid descriptions, terrifying hellhounds, gruesome moments, plenty of suspense, and a librarian in their corner, Malineko has created a dark story, told with compassion, about family, friendship, becoming comfortable with yourself, and standing together, that ends with real hope. Kids who enjoyed A Tale Dark and Grimm or the Shadow School books will find a lot to like here, and parts of the book reminded me of Tuck Everlasting. Knobb’s Ferry may not have a headless horseman, but it does have a ghost girl. Recommended for grades 4-7.

 

Reviewed by Kirsten Kowalewski

Book Review: The Things in Heaven and Earth by Michael Scott Hopkins

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The Things in Heaven and Earth by Michael Scott Hopkins

Black Rose Writing, 2021

ISBN: 9781684337118

Available: paperback, Kindle Bookshop.org |  Amazon.com )

 

The Things in Heaven and Earth is a good read the first time around, but it may take another read in order to understand all the details; some of the early chapters make a lot more sense the second time through.  That said, it’s still a good, imaginative take on the conflict between God and Satan (although those names aren’t really used) being played out through intermediaries on Earth.

 

Nash Baxter is a character with a convoluted life.  He shot and killed his family as a child, became a personal injury lawyer, then quit to become a paranormal hoax-buster and best-selling author, and somehow he is the repository of some of Satan’s life force.  If that isn’t enough, Nash can see real ghosts, and the demons that bind the ghosts to this plane of existence.  Sound complicated?  It is, both to the reader and to Nash.  When explanations are provided, Nash has an engaging habit of telling characters to give it to him in plain English, instead of using metaphysical jargon.  Some parts may still not make complete sense to the reader, but there’s enough to get the gist of it and follow the story.

 

As twisting as the plot is, it keeps you engaged through the uncertainty, to keep turning the pages to see where the story goes next.  Nash is a good leading man, and you’ll find it easy to relate to his down to earth manner.  He meets an assortment of odd companions along the way: his supposedly dead brother, a doctor who is granted mystical healing powers, real people with phantom personalities… quite the eclectic collection.   Somehow, the story holds all of them, and threads together nicely, keeping the interest level high.  The adversity faced by Nash and Co. is also unpredictable; a lightning bolt alone can provide three instant demon enemies for Nash and his friends.  The reader won’t be sure who the antagonists are in the story until close to the end; the author does a good job painting both sides in mystery.  Eventually, all becomes (mostly) clear, and the story wraps up nicely with a final confrontation between Nash and his enemies.

 

It’s a strange, convoluted tale, but it’s an entertaining one, although it might be a bit much for readers who like their fiction straightforward and easy to comprehend.  If you want a story that veers all over the basepaths yet somehow still crosses home plate in style, The Things in Heaven and Earth is for you.

 

Reviewed by Murray Samuelson