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Book Review: Those That Pursue Us Yet by Kyla Lee Ward

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Those That Pursue Us Yet by Kyla Lee Ward

Independent Legions Publishing, 2023

ISBN: 9791280713797

Available: Paperback, Kindle edition

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Those That Pursue Us Yet is a pretty well-written but frustrating novella.  The wording is very good, and the descriptions and settings are well-done, but the plot feels like a bit of an afterthought, and the minimal dialogue doesn’t help move it forward.

 

Almost the entire book takes place in dreams, which is both good and bad. The good is that it allows the author to get away with some pretty wild things that aren’t possible in reality, but the bad is that it makes the whole story seem disjointed.  There are a lot of good set pieces, but it starts to seem like the story is done more for that purpose, as opposed to driving a narrative forward.

 

In the story, Wander and Madeline, patient and shrink, are two women caught in a weird kind of dream hell whenever they fall asleep, as they are pursued by an entity, Phobetor,  Unfortunately, there really isn’t any information given to flesh out Phobetor as a character. It’s simply there.  Both Madeline and Wander can manipulate their dreams to some extent, although they aren’t supposed to pass beyond some sort of metaphysical barrier, as that puts them in Phobetor’s range.  They have safe areas, symbols to link to different dreams, and so on. If it sounds kind of confusing, it is. The whole story is focused on brief moments of wakefulness spaced among numerous dream sequences, and it just doesn’t feel cohesive. More dialogue and keeping focused on the plot would have helped.

 

The author has talent: many of the dream sequences are really well written.  The beach scene of skulls was well done, and the sections in the catacombs beneath Paris were also excellent .  The story just needed the same amount of attention paid to the characters and the narrative as to the descriptions and settings.  This might have been something pretty impressive.  As it is, it feels more like an art piece that a select few will get blown away by, and everyone else will just not understand.

 

Bottom line: This will probably find a niche audience that regards it as brilliant, but other readers may want to skip this one.

 

Reviewed by Murray Samuelson

 

 

Book Review: Lost to Dune Road by Kara Thomas

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Lost to Dune Road by Kara Thomas

Thomas and Mercer, 2024

ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-1662509568

Available: Paperback, Kindle edition, audiobook

 

 

First as a journalist, and then as an investigator, Natalee Ellerin hunts monsters. When writing about the unsolved murder of a young woman leads to the end of her career, she blames herself for mistakes. However, years later, when another young woman is on life support after being attacked in circumstances that are linked to that earlier murder, Natalee knows she must follow through and find out what is going on in an elite enclave on Long Island.

 

The monsters in Lost to Dune Road by Kara Thomas are predators, crooked policemen, and wealthy men who think they are above the law.  This gripping story is part crime novel, detective mystery, psychological thriller, and even a love story. In the end, the point will be to find the guilty, but it will take more than just a nose for a good story and the right questions for Natalee to expose the pattern of sordid crimes against women that are occurring with regularity. Natalee is savvy, sharp, and vulnerable, and her deep sense of loyalty and need to see justice realized compel her risk her safety and the relationships that are precious to her.

 

Kara Thomas has created a long cast of characters who are believable and complex. The action in this novel is fast-paced with new characters and subplots popping up with satisfying frequency without illogical twists thrown in merely for effect.  Readers will also find that the novel brings to mind the real-life horrors from current news, like Jeffrey Epstein’s sex trafficking. These are the crimes, victims, and perpetrators that are hidden in plain sight and so, in some ways, the most terrifying to discover.

 

Reviewed by Nova Hadley

 

Book Review: The Raven’s Crux by Julie Boglisch

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The Raven’s Crux by Julie Boglisch

Black Rose Writing, 2024

ISBN: 9781685133672

Available: Paperback, Kindle edition

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The only drawback to The Raven’s Crux is the cartoonish, completely uninspiring cover of the book.  It doesn’t do justice to the thrilling ghost story contained inside, a story that manages the “crossover” between young adult and adult fiction perfectly.

 

The book provides an exciting story, and at the same time does a good job exploring the nature of friendship among kids–  in this case, middle schoolers.

 

Noah and Aiden Raven are forced to relocate their lives constantly due to their dad’s job as a private investigator, and the small town of Herisdell is just another stop in their nomadic lives.  Dad isn’t a normal PI however: some of his cases involve the paranormal.  He unexpectedly disappears early in the story, and Noah and Aiden are essentially on their own.  Somehow, they have to take care of themselves, while at the same time they are desperate to solve the mystery of dad’s disappearance, since the cops seem to be making no headway.  They have the advantage of having the ability to see and speak to ghosts, which helps, but at times puts them in some pretty terrifying situations.

 

While the brothers make decent detectives, the author did a good job of making it realistic for the age group. The two of them are pretty bright and can make deductions, but they aren’t infallible, like the Three Investigators were back in the 80’s.  (if you remember that far back)  Plus, they do get some help, in the form of their one friend, Stephen (called Phen), his mother, who provides the boys a place to stay,  and young girl ghost, Mia, who accompanies them throughout the story, alternating between being helpful, protective,  and madly cryptic.

 

It’s the dynamics between the four new friends that really holds the reader’s interest.  Noah befriends Mia, while Aiden distrusts her, and the supernatural.  Phen has a crush on Aiden, complicating their friendship, since Aiden doesn’t feel the same.  Truth be told, as good as the brothers are for lead characters, Mia is the scene-stealer and the best part of the book.  She’s perfectly drawn, as a young spirit in form who has existed for many years and feels the weight of time and her unhappy afterlife weighing down on her.  It’s a real heartwarmer as she slowly gets accepted by the others and finds herself remembering some of what it was like to be human.

 

Oh, and did I mention the scare factor?  No mistake, the author knows how to put terror into the pages: the scares in this would easily hold up in any adult horror novel. While there is no real blood needed, and implied violence only, a number of scenes are good for some real mental screams.  One of the early scenes in the Raven home is quite creepy, and the scene in the deserted home full of ghosts is a real fear factory. It might actually be enough to dish out some nightmares to young readers!  Based on this book, the author could certainly write an adult horror thriller, if she chose.

 

Time to ghost into the bottom line: this is a good one.  It holds up as well or better than most of the ghost stories I have read over the past few years, and I read a lot of them.  Give it a chance, it won’t disappoint.  Recommended.

 

Reviewed by Murray Samuelson